Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, June 7, 2019
fantastic Mr Fox on Biteable.
Hi guy this is Biteeable of the book i am reading in my Literacy group please tell me what i need to work on thank you for watching.
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Hi Jack its Fletcher, I really liked the way you talked about when and where fantastic Mr fox was set. You reminded me of the time I made one of these on the same topic. Next time you could add stuff like your favourite part of the story.
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Deleteim lonely i have no comments :(
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